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Submitted: December 11, 2012
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Prank Chronicles part 2by *Yooyfull

Flash / Animations

Heh.. it's been a while has it not? ..sorry :<

Twilight got shoved into a puddle by Dash last time - and shes cooking for revenge.. PINKIE PIE STYLE
..sorta
..I guess?

Gimme a break -.-

*ONE more in the series is planned out, after that - we will see :3*

Here is the first part: [link]

I used a completely different style for Dash this time, any critique on it would be swell ^^
Also - I know that there are a lot of errors here and there that I just couldn't be bothered with, but I am going to try out this critique request thing because I want to use my premium that

so kindly gave me <3

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My Little Pony belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust

Critique by !winxlover12345 Jan 4, 2013, 12:28:53 PM

i think this was great, and i know this was a lot of hard work. i liked the part where it rain chocolate or mud ( or whatever it was) on the blue pony. i think it needs some sounds and it should be a little longer. overall, this was absolutely wonderful, quite amazing! i think you should keep up doing these type of work and i am sure you will get many positive comments and likes on this work and your other works in the future. i think next time you should come up with something instead of pranks. Go ponies!

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Critique by ~caliginousXprincess Dec 11, 2012, 3:31:33 PM

Well over all I say it's really good (better than I could do and I have no idea how to do this) but a few things i noticed was that their noses should of been out a little more, their eyes should of been a bit rounder/ bigger, the rope around the cloud should of been a little tighter, their mouths seemed a bit too small and there was no puddle under rainbow dash after she had all the chocolate rain.. or chocolate milk rain... but over all I really liked it. keep up all the amazing and good work