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Heh.. it's been a while has it not? ..sorry :<

Twilight got shoved into a puddle by Dash last time - and shes cooking for revenge.. PINKIE PIE STYLE
..sorta
..I guess?

Gimme a break -.-

*ONE more in the series is planned out, after that - we will see :3*

Here is the first part: [link]

I used a completely different style for Dash this time, any critique on it would be swell ^^
Also - I know that there are a lot of errors here and there that I just couldn't be bothered with, but I am going to try out this critique request thing because I want to use my premium that :iconmlp-sharpshooter: so kindly gave me <3

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My Little Pony belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust
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:iconcaliginousxprincess:
Well over all I say it's really good (better than I could do and I have no idea how to do this) but a few things i noticed was that their noses should of been out a little more, their eyes should of been a bit rounder/ bigger, the rope around the cloud should of been a little tighter, their mouths seemed a bit too small and there was no puddle under rainbow dash after she had all the chocolate rain.. or chocolate milk rain... but over all I really liked it. keep up all the amazing and good work :)
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Critique by winxlover12345 Jan 4, 2013, 12:28:53 PM
i think this was great, and i know this was a lot of hard work. i liked the part where it rain chocolate or mud ( or whatever it was) on the blue pony. i think it needs some sounds and it should be a little longer. overall, this was absolutely wonderful, quite amazing! i think you should keep up doing these type of work and i am sure you will get many positive comments and likes on this work and your other works in the future. i think next time you should come up with something instead of pranks. Go ponies!
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:iconiloveyoudiscord:
IloveyouDiscord Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014
Hey hey hey, wait. Discord helped with this, didn't he? If he not, then where they found that cotton candy cloud?
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Discord is always around when there is mischief going on :P
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:icontinkerbot03:
tinkerbot03 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
read  the comment below
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:iconprincess-luna-love:
princess-luna-love Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
<font><font>POOR DASH!</font></font>
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:iconprincesslunamlpfim:
PrincessLunaMLPFiM Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
lol lol soooooooooo super lolz funny
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:icondanellleyte:
danellleyte Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
BLOOM!!
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:iconthedrewemaster:
TheDreweMaster Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Look on the bright side, Dashy. At least you'll have a nice, quick tongue bath. ;)
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehe yeah ;3
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:iconlegate47:
Legate47 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I could imagine DHX doing something like this for an episode.
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:iconponymystic:
PonyMystic Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LLLLICCCCK.
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehe indeed :3
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:iconcottoncloudyfilly:
cottoncloudyfilly Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
rfunny
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^.^
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:icondestrakon:
destrakon Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
*deep voice* CHOCOLATE RAIN!!!
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The pink stays dry but Dashie feels the pain! :D
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:icondestrakon:
destrakon Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
HA! :rofl:
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:iconmightymorphinpower4:
MightyMorphinPower4 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
Lol funny aniamtion
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:3
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:iconjose-ramiro:
Jose-Ramiro Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehehe...
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^_^
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:icondjjafeth:
djjafeth Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
double combo!
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:iconxxcreepylemonxx:
xxCreepyLemonxx Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know much about animation, but this is totally awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Poor Dash!!!! Did Twi think up that prank?? :icontwilightepicsmileplz:
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :3
Dash had it coming though (she pranked Twi first, link is in the description :))

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:iconcrazysparkleshrugplz:
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:iconxxcreepylemonxx:
xxCreepyLemonxx Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :3
:icondashfacehoofplz:: Oh, Dash XD
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:iconblackdragonthebad:
blackdragonthebad Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
How the fuck is that a prank? I mean... ah.... how...
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pouring chocolate on someone is a pretty solid prank in my book.
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:iconpumice-footstone:
Pumice-Footstone Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
:clap: very good! from my limited knowledge of animations. (which is not much) this is amazing!
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It has a lot of flaws, so i'd stay away from the word "amazing" but thank you :)
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:iconpumice-footstone:
Pumice-Footstone Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
Oh, your welcome anyway. ^^
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:iconmrkeyblademaster1992:
MrKeybladeMaster1992 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice one!
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icontwilightclapplz:
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:iconunlockablex:
Unlockablex Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional General Artist
I kinda need to shit.
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I.. uhm.. Okay?
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:iconunlockablex:
Unlockablex Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
Now Im confused, the others told me you like it when people shit.... and thats what gives you the creativity to make beautiful art like this.
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Uh.. I'm a tad bit more confused than you are, thats for sure :P
I'm just going to focus on the part where you call my art beautiful, thank you!
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:iconunlockablex:
Unlockablex Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Professional General Artist
Just keep away from my family you god-damn fat fetish jewish tomato!
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
... why the insults?
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I've had it, stay away from every talking to me again or i'll report you. Good day sir.
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:icongreenrob:
Greenrob Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
nice job.
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:iconyooyfull:
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:icongreenrob:
Greenrob Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
np.
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