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Heh.. it's been a while has it not? ..sorry :<

Twilight got shoved into a puddle by Dash last time - and shes cooking for revenge.. PINKIE PIE STYLE
..I guess?

Gimme a break -.-

*ONE more in the series is planned out, after that - we will see :3*

Here is the first part: [link]

I used a completely different style for Dash this time, any critique on it would be swell ^^
Also - I know that there are a lot of errors here and there that I just couldn't be bothered with, but I am going to try out this critique request thing because I want to use my premium that :iconmlp-sharpshooter: so kindly gave me <3

My Little Pony belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust
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Well over all I say it's really good (better than I could do and I have no idea how to do this) but a few things i noticed was that their noses should of been out a little more, their eyes should of been a bit rounder/ bigger, the rope around the cloud should of been a little tighter, their mouths seemed a bit too small and there was no puddle under rainbow dash after she had all the chocolate rain.. or chocolate milk rain... but over all I really liked it. keep up all the amazing and good work :)
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Critique by winxlover12345 Jan 4, 2013, 12:28:53 PM
i think this was great, and i know this was a lot of hard work. i liked the part where it rain chocolate or mud ( or whatever it was) on the blue pony. i think it needs some sounds and it should be a little longer. overall, this was absolutely wonderful, quite amazing! i think you should keep up doing these type of work and i am sure you will get many positive comments and likes on this work and your other works in the future. i think next time you should come up with something instead of pranks. Go ponies!
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IloveyouDiscord Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  New member
Hey hey hey, wait. Discord helped with this, didn't he? If he not, then where they found that cotton candy cloud?
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Discord is always around when there is mischief going on :P
tinkerbot03 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
read  the comment below
princess-luna-love Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
<font><font>POOR DASH!</font></font>
PrincessLunaMLPFiM Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
lol lol soooooooooo super lolz funny
danellleyte Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
TheDreweMaster Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Look on the bright side, Dashy. At least you'll have a nice, quick tongue bath. ;)
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehe yeah ;3
Legate47 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I could imagine DHX doing something like this for an episode.
PonyMystic Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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